tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post4282449065595351046..comments2024-02-03T20:08:19.046-08:00Comments on Degraded Damsels: Prank War 2013: Undercover at HoneywellBerserkasaurus Rexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09344932972038475976noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-11580159248124735772013-06-01T09:17:52.391-07:002013-06-01T09:17:52.391-07:00One of your best yet. I particularly liked the sec...One of your best yet. I particularly liked the second part. You captured her surprise perfectly.Tchesernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-71642146556856595242013-05-31T03:52:19.054-07:002013-05-31T03:52:19.054-07:00Great photo's with a good story behind it. Wat...Great photo's with a good story behind it. Watching things unfold so wrongly for her was very enjoyable and a teasing end. Thought the first person style worked well as did Jane's little comments. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-83798983722361352182013-05-28T21:52:32.290-07:002013-05-28T21:52:32.290-07:00As with Ian, this one really pushes a LOT of my bu...As with Ian, this one really pushes a LOT of my buttons. I also agree that the commentary from a reader of the diary is a useful addition. It's tricky to add anything to an epistolary story, but this gimmick is a good one for providing someone else's viewpoint.Dr. Psychohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05674134879261502504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-51685179238182273842013-05-27T02:33:06.855-07:002013-05-27T02:33:06.855-07:00Beautiful, simply beautiful: an undercover investi...Beautiful, simply beautiful: an undercover investigation that goes horribly wrong, age regression, humiliating uniforms, spankings, bureaucracy gone mad, a secret betrayal... this series has it all.<br /><br />I also love the idea of a journal with commentary from a third party. Excellent stuff B-Rex, and we haven't even gotten to PZ yet!Iannoreply@blogger.com