tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post6040984999313730877..comments2024-02-03T20:08:19.046-08:00Comments on Degraded Damsels: Hiatus, againBerserkasaurus Rexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09344932972038475976noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-19300411037539416362018-01-21T00:31:13.747-08:002018-01-21T00:31:13.747-08:00Can you please finish this. It would have to be on...Can you please finish this. It would have to be one of my favorite starts to a story and it just stops with so much suspense.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-4055794467800089752015-06-29T23:30:47.739-07:002015-06-29T23:30:47.739-07:00Continue this!Continue this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-14717816415101221762014-12-22T21:43:19.922-08:002014-12-22T21:43:19.922-08:00This is definitely a story I plan to come back to,...This is definitely a story I plan to come back to, one day. Though I have used some of the ideas I had in store for the detective in other stories by now, I've held back some things for the future. When I have time, and my mood is right, I'll work on finally continuing this. Glad you've enjoyed thus far, though. :-)<br /><br />- B-RexBerserkasaurus Rexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09344932972038475976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-25153170769540186872014-03-06T16:58:38.167-08:002014-03-06T16:58:38.167-08:00could you pleaseeeee finish this story? its got a ...could you pleaseeeee finish this story? its got a great beginning and the suspense is killing me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-15754640180907178282014-02-28T00:43:18.275-08:002014-02-28T00:43:18.275-08:00Shame that this never saw a continuation!Shame that this never saw a continuation!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-71275563878044920602013-07-07T21:10:28.600-07:002013-07-07T21:10:28.600-07:00Very nice teaser. It seems that a lot of differen...Very nice teaser. It seems that a lot of different interesting things have been done to her, and the foreshadowing has been left especially mysterious on many of them. This is already sounding like a really gripping new story from you, and I'll definitely want to check it out when it's finished.Meisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14385548637807641027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-76280051457232764062013-07-05T23:47:17.639-07:002013-07-05T23:47:17.639-07:00All the best for your recovery. The worst pain I ...All the best for your recovery. The worst pain I ever experienced was not after brain tumor surgery, but a root canal, so I know how bad it can be.<br /><br />Your story fragment has an excellent opener, building more slowly than would, say, a Prank War entry, and with more lifelike medical detail.<br /><br />The detective has been given surgery that all seems to be shaping her into some kind of perfect human sex toy -- a delicious idea, quite delicious.<br /><br />Lips inflated, teeth removed, something funny about her tongue, and something metallic back there. Various nasty possibilities come to mind, and I note that she hasn't tried to talk yet . . . .Dr. Psychohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05674134879261502504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-75502164922864713142013-07-05T17:56:24.397-07:002013-07-05T17:56:24.397-07:00Ditto - sorry to hear you're under the weather...Ditto - sorry to hear you're under the weather.<br /><br />Great snippet, I'm really enjoying the air of mystery - who has kidnapped the detective and what has he done to her? I also particularly liked the way you have trying to remain professional despite what's happened so far.<br /><br />Iannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4091983369431931850.post-803392044630940562013-07-05T12:39:25.028-07:002013-07-05T12:39:25.028-07:00Hope you finish this when you are feeling up to it...Hope you finish this when you are feeling up to it. Get well soon.Ianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11089075373700373443noreply@blogger.com