I did something a little different here, in that I chose to put the dialogue outside of the main caption. The picture was mostly empty space and the text was really too long for what I was wanting, so it all worked out. Hopefully the different colors will make it a bit easier to read as well.
Yes, I think the arrangement of the text is quite successful, and the color-coding strikes me as a good idea.
ResponderBorrarThe scenario is lovely, and a good deal more realistic than most age regressions. It reminds me of the story of the Tichborne Claimant:
[http://www.sensationpress.com/tichborneclaimant.htm]
Lovely pic, lovely red bottom, and nice story :)
ResponderBorrarGood work on the layout!
Britney
It's always fun to see 20 and 30 something grown women who are used to living carefree lives being forced into the regimented, restricted life of an overly-protected teen queen :) Hope to see more of this kind of thing!
ResponderBorrar