Today's three-part caption is an old idea I finally got around to writing, not a prize cap, though it does use Meisa's "Punny Money" character from the superheroine caption contest last year.
Hope you all enjoy these, they're a bit rushed to be honest, but I'm trying to work through a very bad case of writer's block, and I'm tired of throwing away captions every time something doesn't quite *click*.
As always, please let me know what you think. And have a fun weekend, everybody.
- B-Rex
Oh, look at those lovely bosom buddies ^.^
ReplyDeleteI do like Punny's way of forming superhero crossovers :P
Always love your stuff. YOu're the best and most devious!
ReplyDeleteNice and devious. I love the fact that the girls know where their key to escape is but are unable to reach it.
ReplyDeletePs i love the inverse stars
I think this is a very nicely integrated and "tiered" story, where Haley/Lass's powers are wound very nicely throughout Punny's joke as a whole. What I love most is that, for the first time, the target of your story has been forcibly given enormous hooters that LITERALLY have their own identities.
ReplyDeleteIt's a real joy to sit back and imagine her actually attempting to argue out loud with her chest, every day. Lecturing them, ordering them, yanking and slapping them back in the right direction, and trying to find new punishments for acting up too much.
It does feel like I want even more, if that's what you mean by "not quite clicking", but sometimes that how you know a story's good. :)
I read a story in which a woman was tricked into letting her body become the new bosom of a woman she hated, and I did think it would be even more fun if each breast had been a different woman, so that the villainess could enjoy taunting each of her breasts by name, as individuals.
ReplyDeleteThis is just marvelously wicked. Do carry on, Rex.
I thought this was a really nice series! I know you said they feel a bit rushed, but honestly I felt the pacing between the three captions was solid enough. We've got our introductions to the characters and the situation taken care of in the first two, and the third is a fun epilogue caption where we get to see the payoff. And I thought Haley's annoyed attitude was pretty fun. Plus, how wicked to tell the two "implants" the location of the shard! The concept of Haley being called upon more often due to her increased strength (despite being shown to be quite clumsy when her boobs are bouncing around) is really entertaining to imagine.
ReplyDeleteBut yeah, really creative, fun scenario, and I think you did a fabulous job with the execution.