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Wednesday, July 14, 2021

Guest Post: Making A Splash

Happy Humpday, everybody!

Today I have a long series of captions sent in by a Guest captioner who wants to remain anonymous. It's a dark little revenge tale, with a unique mermaid theme.

He spent some time writing these, and would very much like to hear your feedback in the comments, so please let him know what you think.












I hope everyone enjoys the Guest posting, and again, please let the author know what you think.

- B-Rex
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10 comments:

  1. Kinky ScientistJuly 14, 2021 at 6:10 PM

    I did not read the whole thing, it is really hard in this format. Small text, long lines. The author might better make a doc, pdf or just a text post.

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  2. Leila StoatJuly 15, 2021 at 1:22 PM

    I think this story would be improved by some editing and shortening down to the essential. It could be told in about half the images we have here.

    Other than that, it's quite an interesting concept. It could have gone to more interesting places, but it's not bad. It's nice.

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  3. ffqJuly 16, 2021 at 7:52 AM

    I had trouble with getting myself to read it, and most of the reason is because it's a lot of captions all at once. 11 captions with a lot of text is a big bump from usually seeing around 3-5 captions at most. I agree with Kinky Scientist about trying a different format, I made my captions into text posts with images when I started adding to BDSMLR.

    My other thoughts are more like my preferences. I would've liked if Sarah was a marine biologist or something like that to make turning into a mermaid have more impact.

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  4. TMGJuly 16, 2021 at 11:25 AM

    The story itself is good and the mermaid-idea is very I teresting.

    But is a bit too long to work good with captions, especially every cap is quite long and there are 11 of them.

    So either shorten the captions (I think 1/4 less would be good) or have it as a story with the pictures thrown in after segments.

    Otherwise it is quite good.

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  5. AnonymousJuly 16, 2021 at 3:24 PM

    Amazing detailed story (would have only hoped for some more body modification details).
    BTW: who would've guessed that this bar exist in real life
    https://www.yelp.com/biz_photos/dive-bar-sacramento-2?start=0&tab=interior

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  6. AnonymousJuly 26, 2021 at 2:20 AM

    Mmmm...diabolical.

    -- Dr. Psycho

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2021 at 8:28 AM

    Wow, I loved it

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  8. PornUltras.comSeptember 28, 2021 at 4:17 PM

    Very good job! Keep it up!

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  9. ffqOctober 28, 2021 at 5:47 PM

    It's been a while since you posted, I hope you're doing okay.

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  10. AnonymousMay 8, 2022 at 4:18 AM

    Hey everyone, I'm the author of these captions and would love your feedback :) my email address is Albarez9@protonmail.com

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