The basic idea for this caption started with a comment I left on one of Alyssa's caps last year, and showed up again more recently in comments on this blog. I've tried to work in as many details as people have suggested, both in comments and through private email. I ultimately had to cut a few things for length, as this turned into a very long little caption, but I'm very happy with how it turned out in the end.
[I'm going to put this cap after the break, just to see if making people actually click on the post increases views and comments. And 'cause I'm mean like that! :-)]
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Besides the new caption, I have a new ebook out, finally! It is called Paddled! and was originally posted here under the title of Trials of a Schoolgirl (it has since been removed), and is heavily based on my caption series, Ramblings of a Schoolgirl. Other links are available on my Humbled Harlots blog, found in the top right corner of this page.
It's a spanking/corporal punishment fetish story, with Age Regression and Reduced Status themes, and a lot of public humiliation as well. I think it is my best Age Regression story, personally.
The finalized ebook is a bit longer than what was originally posted here, a little over 14,500 words. Most of the content is basically the same, but I rewrote every scene, sometimes adding new ideas or removing stuff that didn't work. It's a better story now, I think.
I hope you all enjoy the new caption and the new ebook. Please let me know what you think of either, and have a wonderful Labor Day! :-)
- B-Rex
Nice appropriate punishment, enjoyed the story and how it gets worse for her, the closer you get to the ending.
ReplyDelete20 years. Wow, now THAT'S a Beta Test! :D Great new ideas on the eggs B-Rex, I really love the new technologies you're always thinking up.
ReplyDeleteThat's a hell of a punishment. Especially if all that belly is just one egg and all the deliveries are to be normal. That's sure going to stretch a bit, honey. ^.~
ReplyDeleteThat said, I want to see more of this judge now. Cool and unusual punishment is a trope that sure goes well with your line of work, and I have ideas teeming now. *.*
(Oh, and of course it had to be today, eh XD )
Yeah, I can think up quite a few cruel and unusual punishments...
DeleteHmm, perhaps I could make a series of caps having my Judge render punishments to some of the more arrogant villains/instigators in some of my older captions. Maybe Juliet from my Present series, and a few others. Hmm....
- B-Rex
Poor Marcie. From upwardly-mobile executive-track professional woman to a hugely-pregnant receptionist. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteWhen I saw the photo and read the beginning of the caption, I thought Marcie's punishment would be something along the lines of having to serve as a host mother for other women's babies (something I have seen in a number of stories). Instead, it's something entirely new, another fine product from B-Rex Laboratories!
I think it would be even better, though, if Marcie's "eggs" had some special utility, so she could literally pay her debt to society (and to her female co-workers especially) with her suffering. Some scientifically-plausible equivalent to those golden eggs that poor Lara was generating. Perhaps the eggs are soaking up pregnancy-related hormones which can be used to help stabilize difficult pregnancies?
At the very least, her milk should certainly be made available to new mothers at the firm.
I simply love this cap it is amazing i love the egg idea now i wish they where real so i would have to suffer the same fate as Marcie 20 years of having to be pregnant is a wonderful punishment and to have my breasts consistently having to be pumped of there milk would be cool
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