This one is based on an story idea I had ages ago. I probably should have gone a bit darker with the story, on second thought. Maybe a sequel is in order.
Thanks for the feedback! I've got a few pics that would probably work for a potential sequel, I've just got to figure out a story to fit them. I'll see what I can do. I've got a few other caps that I'm almost finished with, so I'll probably get them done first.
I'll echo Dr. Psycho - with the swapping of the forms at the end, it's begging for a follow up.
I think you struck the right balance in tone between a woman brought low (and from her past, it sounds like some well-desrved karma) with a bit of light-heartedness.
I also like it when you can invoke a little sympathy for the victim for their situation, which you managed to do here.
I, for one, would be delighted to see a sequel to this delicious scenario.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback! I've got a few pics that would probably work for a potential sequel, I've just got to figure out a story to fit them. I'll see what I can do. I've got a few other caps that I'm almost finished with, so I'll probably get them done first.
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I'll echo Dr. Psycho - with the swapping of the forms at the end, it's begging for a follow up.
ReplyDeleteI think you struck the right balance in tone between a woman brought low (and from her past, it sounds like some well-desrved karma) with a bit of light-heartedness.
I also like it when you can invoke a little sympathy for the victim for their situation, which you managed to do here.
Absolutely loved this one! The humiliating name, the over-the-top new lifestyle and especially the end! Wonderful finish!
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