Anyway, if the title hasn't given it away, I tried to write the dialogue as a very in-your-face drill sergeant, but with that NWO bimboish touch.
Hope you all enjoyed these three caps. I'm going to be busy working on RSB3 the next week or so, but I'll try and get some more caps out too. (And especially, finally finish off making q and Tina Maree's prize captions. So sorry I've taken so long on that.)
- B-Rex
Yum, yum, some good old fashioned military misogyny!
ReplyDeleteThe occasional error grates on the mind's ear of this Navy veteran (for one, Marines are never referred to as "soldiers"), but I enjoyed this.
How could the "Major" (presumably a former Lieutenant Commander, the equivalent Navy rank) not have seen those "twin mounted howitzers" coming, especially since she had to sign off for them?
Oh, well, that's life (or life under the NWO, anyway).
Hey, you're just lucky I spelled Marines properly. Took too rewrites before I caught "corpse" instead of "corps". :-) Everything I know about navy/military titles I learned from reading military science fiction.
DeleteGlad you liked the caps otherwise, though. :-)
- B-Rex
Nice and fun, and loved the front mounted howitzers :) looks like you need to be reading better military sci fi to get your terms right hehe
ReplyDeleteI love everything going on in your NWO universe.
ReplyDelete...Still needed her signed permission on the new equipment, huh? Guess there's still a lot of progress that needs to be made. ;D