Hello all! In lieu of a caption this post, I'm posting a short Work-in-Progress story I posted a few weeks ago on my Patreon. This started out as an attempt to write a sequel to my recent 'Stepmother Knows Best' captions, but ended up going a very different direction.
I've also posted another WIP story on the Patreon, based on my 'Thank You for Staring' mind-control story on Humbled Harlots. This is a bit longer, and will be an ebook when I finish it.
I'm sorry I don't seem as productive lately as I was a few weeks ago; I'm spending a lot of time learning my around Daz Studio. I've actually made a lot of artwork this last two weeks. I'll be posting more full-size examples on the Patreon shortly, but I'm still rendering a few pics right this moment (it takes between 1 and 2 hours to render each image), and having to reject about 90% due to lighting issues.
Here's a recent pic of my Kahri Burdens character, this time with better armor, a new background, and yet-to-be-inflated tits:
In particular, I've been trying to make some Black Widow 3-D images for some caption ideas I have, and I'm quite pleased with how they are coming out:
This is a test image, attempting to recreate this morph I used for my last Black Widow caption:
Thankfully, I've got a much better outfit now (the one in the test image is for a different model, and glitches out just below where I cropped the image), but you'll have to wait for when I post those images. Which won't be very long now, I promise.
I've also finally put up a zipped file of my Prank War Saga captions on Patreon for those of you EZ Pledges; over 150 captions!
Anyway, now that all that is done with, let's get to today's story. As always, just hit the "Read More". A final huge thanks to everyone for being patient with me, and please let me know what you think of this story and my artwork.
- B-Rex
His Wife's Daughter (Draft)
by Tabitha Kohls
Copyright 2019
***
"It's not fair," Ash Martin
grumbled to himself. "Why does my life have to become a fucking
living hell, just because some dipshit asshole lost his house in a
divorce?!"
It was all his wife's fault, not that
he could ever tell her that, of course. She was mad enough at him for
refusing to welcome her boss to the house. But it really was her
fault he was even in this nightmarish mess in the first place.
"Why the hell did Mandy tell him
she lived with 'Ashley', she knows I hate that name. Why didn't she
just say Ashton, like I always do?"
Ash chewed his lip in consternation,
unthinkingly. Instantly the taste of his new lip gloss filled his
mouth. "Ugh, fuck!"
He spit on the patio, not that it would
help any; he'd been tasting his lip gloss since the girls at the
salon applied it last week. Some sort of new product, extra-long
lasting they'd claimed. He already hated raspberry before, now he
absolutely loathed it.
Sighing, he resumed his brooding,
swallowing down the nasty flavored drool filling his mouth.
"Ashley, she just had to say
'Ashley'," he muttered.
Of course, her boss had assumed she
meant her daughter, not her husband. Embarrassed, she never bothered
to correct him.
And the charade had gone on ever since.
Ash hadn't really even minded it back then, to be fair. It meant he
never had to come to the stupid staff parties the hospital hosted
every few months, trying to explain to a bunch of over-paid doctors
that he wasn't a stay-at-home husband, that he was a successful web
designer, all while they made snide remarks about their degrees and
huge salaries.
No, he hadn't much cared about his
wife's mistake back then, but it had sure come back to bite him in
the ass.
He heard the door bell ring, then his
wife loudly greeting her boss and welcoming him in to their house.
No, it's Her house now, at
least until that asshole moves out, he reminded himself,
bitterly.
Her boss, Chief of Surgery at the
hospital, had gone through a nasty divorce a few months before. Mandy
had bored Ash to tears for weeks, talking about his divorce seemingly
every night.
Of course, all she ever seemed to talk
about was her boss and work, so that was nothing new. He'd learned to
tune it all out years ago.
But then, last week, her boss had
officially lost his house to his wife, along with the dog, and God
only knew how much money the loaded bastard had had.
Dumb idiot, should've put it all in
a trust or hidden it overseas, Ash thought, rolling his eyes. As
far as he was concerned, the doctor had gotten what he deserved for
marrying a harpy in the first place.
Of course, Mandy hadn't taken the same
view. She'd spent two days boo-hooing over her boss's 'poor
situation', before she finally announced that she'd offered to let
the man come and live with them.
"It's just until he gets back
on his feet," Ash sneered, doing a decent impersonation of
Mandy's voice, if he did say so himself. A week of practicing talking
in a higher register had helped.
And of course, her boss would be
expecting to meet 'Ashley' when he arrived. Which had lead to Ash
getting a total makeover, a whole new wardrobe, and boxing up all his
old clothes, his antique record collection, his X-Box and games, even
his Godzilla and Kung-Fu films. Basically anything that didn't jive
with 'teenage girl'.
His whole life was boxed up, now locked
up tight in a storage locker somewhere across town.
She'd even locked up his car, though
she'd waited until the moving company guys had gotten it on the
truck, before she told him that 'Ashley' most certainly did not own a
vintage Mustang.
His new car was a beat-up sedan with
squeaky brakes and a gerbil in a hamster wheel for an engine. Worse,
it had a new GPS feature installed, that would shut the car down if
he drove it outside the approved locations. Mandy swore the car had
come like that when she bought it, for all of $500, from a friend at
work. Apparently the device was the newest thing in Parental
Monitoring. It even came with a sensor that would block phone signals
when the key was in the ignition!
Mandy had insisted he live as 'Ashley'
for the whole week, to better get in character before her boss
arrived. Trips to the salon had followed, first to get a manicure and
his hair dyed, then the follow-up appointment for his new hair
extensions. And then round after round of hair styling, coloring. She
had even insisted he get lessons from the stylists in applying makeup
and how to take care of his new auburn locks.
Needless to say, the week had been one
utter hell after another.
But nothing, absolutely nothing, could
compare with his new bouncy attention grabbers.
Ash looked back at his laptop, and
frowned, typing in another search query. He took extra care, he'd
already spent an hour out on the back patio, trying to search the
internet, and his constant typos kept slowing him down.
His new nails were thankfully short
enough not to interfere... much. But they were coated in thick layers
of glossy, blood red nail polish, and after a week, it still showed
no signs of wearing off. He was starting to sense a trend there.
"Dammit," he muttered,
hitting backspace in disgust. He'd hit 'U' instead of 'I', again.
Of course, it wasn't his new nails that
were causing him trouble typing.
"Fuck, this is getting fuckin'
ridiculous," he snapped, turning off the laptop in disgust.
He stared down at his chest, glaring at
his new... boobs.
Even more than the humiliation of
living as a teenage girl in his own house, he most hated his new
breasts. If hate was even the right term; he despised them. They
constantly bounced, with even the slightest movement, such that he
could never, not even for a second, forget they were there.
Even now, they sloshed gently side to
side, obstructing his view of the keyboard. It was like they were
mocking him with their jiggling.
They were damned heavy too, and his
back hadn't stopped hurting since the clinic visit.
Rather than show sympathy, or maybe
even admit that they were a bad idea after all, his wife had only
used them to introduce him to the wide and horrible world of bras,
lingerie, and the madness that was cup-sizes.
And then she'd taken him to get a back
massage at the spa across town, which, though painfully humiliating
as it had been to spend a day being pampered like some teenage
princess, he had to admit it had made him feel better.
But he'd been horrified when Mandy
announced she'd gone ahead and signed him up for a weekly session, as
a 'thank you' present for putting up with the whole situation.
Worse, she'd actually paid a full year
in advance, like she didn't she even realize he'd have to go there
when he was back to normal! The only men at the spa were gay guys,
like the oily dude who had given him the massage. There was no way
Ash would be seen dead there, at least not once he wasn't pretending
to be a teenage girl, anyway.
Of course, getting breasts had not been
his idea. He'd outright refused to get them, at first, but Mandy had
insisted, saying they'd help sell him as a woman.
When he still refused, on the grounds
that it was too embarrassing to even contemplate, she'd pointed out
that it would be even more embarrassing if her boss figured out who
he really was. And having breasts would assure the thought never
crossed the man's mind.
Why does she always have better
arguments than me, he thought, staring daggers at the monsters
bobbing over his keyboard.
Of course, even after he'd finally
agreed, he'd never expected these... things. He'd expected his
breasts would be silicone falsies, or even just a stuffed bra.
He'd certainly never have agreed to get
implants, even if he had often asked Mandy about maybe getting a
little work done on her own chest.
Mandy had laughed when he brought up
implants, to take them off the table entirely as an option. She'd
calmly told him she had 'a much better idea', and not an hour after
agreeing to get a set of boobs of his very own, he was sitting in a
chair in a clinic by the hospital, getting weird injections all over
his chest.
At the time, Ash had thought they were
saline injections, or something similar. Especially as his chest
began to swell with each new injection.
By the time the last needle had gone
in, Ash was sporting a set of genuine knockers. He hadn't realized
until they visits to the mall to fill his drawers with bras, but he
was actually more endowed than his wife now!
After a few days, they shrank a bit,
but then the shrinking had stopped and they seemed as pert as ever,
if somehow more bouncy than real breasts should be.
On a whim, he'd finally decided to
search for the stuff they'd injected him with, now that his laptop
had finally returned from the computer technicians. They'd managed to
replace the keyboard Mandy accidentally stepped on a few weeks back,
but unfortunately they'd had to use a recycled one. He didn't care
for the bright pink, but at least the computer worked now.
"Who the hell has ever heard of
'Synthol', anyway?" he growled, glaring at his laptop. He'd
finally bothered to look the stuff up.
Site Enhancement Oil. SEO.
No matter what he searched for, all he
found was picture after picture of bodybuilders, all looking roided
up to the nines and gross. He'd searched for breasts injections of
the stuff, but couldn't find any info.
It didn't help that his laptop had had
all the parental locks enabled since it came back from the repair
store. At least half his image searches came up censored, especially
when he used 'breasts' as a search term. In fact, when he'd tried to
search for 'boobs', he'd gotten only images of some bird called a
'blue-footed booby'.
He'd have to send it back to be fixed,
and he wasn't about to do that. It'd be another week before he got it
back, at least.
More importantly, now that Mandy
confiscated his phone when he refused to update his social media
pages as his new 'Ashley' alter-ego, the pink laptop was his only
link to the outside world.
Even if that link would only let him
search for images of half-naked bodybuilders covered in oil.
"And this is my lovely daughter,
Ashley."
Ash shivered inwardly at the sound of
his name, especially next to 'daughter'. He didn't turn around,
refused to budge.
"She's just a little shy, don't
take it personally, Marcus."
Since when is she on a first name
basis with her boss, Ash thought, frowning.
"You're as lovely as your mother,
Ashley. I'm very pleased to meet you."
The man's voice was deeper than he'd
expected, and had come from... a long way up.
"Hey." Ash said in way of
greeting, using his most bitchy-teen voice.
"She likes you, I can tell,"
he heard his wife say, just loudly enough to be sure he didn't miss
it. "Okay, she needs to finish her homework, so why don't I show
you the house and we can get your clothes put away."
Clothes? How much did the guy bring,
he's only supposed to be here until he finds an apartment?
Ash turned, but the pair were already
gone. Turning back to his laptop, he huffed in annoyance and crossed
his arms, inadvertently pushing his new tits up. He growled, and
pushed the globes back down before they popped out of his bra.
"Hey, you're Ashley, right?"
Ash shrieked in alarm at the unexpected
voice, jumping to his feet, and very nearly slapping his face with
his suddenly escaping breasts.
Fumbling frantically, he shoved his new
appendages back into the protective embrace of his bar, and then
slowly turned around.
He could only stare in shock at the
tall boy standing in the kitchen doorway.
"Hi, I'm Jackson, though you can
call me Jax."
Who the fuck!?! He's huge!!
"Uh, uh, uh..." he blinked,
realizing he was staring, open mouthed at the giant teenager. The boy
was at least six foot, and probably several inches more. Which meant
he absolutely towered over Ash's five-foot four, even "Uh, Ash,
I mean, y-you can call me Ash."
The boy winked. "Happy to meet
you, Ash." He looked up at the house. "Wow, nice place.
Say, you wanna show me around, I think our parents are busy with
their own thing, ya know?"
It took a moment for his words to fully
register. Parents? OUR parents?!! Wait, he's--
"Uh, Mand--er, Mom didn't say
Marcus had a son," he managed, biting his lip. Raspberries
flooded his mouth again. He swallowed. "Uh, I mean, uh, yeah,
sure."
"Great!" The boy stepped back
into the door frame, swinging his arm before him. "Ladies
first."
Ash swallowed again, quickly licking a
bit of drool that had worked over his lip. The taste of raspberries
returned with a vengeance. "Uh, y-yeah," -Gulp- "Ladies
first, right."
He stepped through the door, but the
huge boy took up a lot of room. Ash nearly gasped as he squeezed
past, and his pert breasts slid over the boy's abs. Fuck!!
"Oh good, you two met already.
Ashley, this is Jackson, er, sorry, Jax. He's Marcus's son.
He'll be staying with us too."
Ash and Jax turned, as their parents,
or at least, one of their parents, entered the kitchen.
"Uh, yeah, he introduced himself,"
Ash said, glaring at his wife. She just smiled back.
"Now, I know you won't like to
hear this, but we don't have enough rooms for everyone, so we'll have
to double up, at least for a few nights."
Ash got the hint, and pretended to sigh
in exasperation. Of course, it wasn't all pretend. He'd have a very
long and frank talk with Mandy tonight, in bed.
"Yeah, I guess. Whatever."
"Good. See Marcus, I told you she
was mature enough to make a fuss." Ash fought down an urge to
stick his raspberry-flavored tongue at his wife. She caught his eye,
and winked, then turned to Jax. "Don't worry Jax, it's only
until the renovators finish Ashley's room. You don't mind sharing
your room with her for a few nights, right?"
Your room?! Renovators!?!!
Ash nearly screamed, but the huge boy
suddenly grabbed him, pulling him into a huge bear hug and lifting
the man clear off the floor. His breasts were flattened by the boy's
huge pecs.
"Are you kidding?! Me and Ash are
gonna be best buds, I know it."
Ash gasped as he was dropped back to
his feet, nearly losing his balance as his breasts sloshed and his
three-inch kitten heels slid on the tile floor.
"See, I told you they'd get along
great," Mandy said, to the Marcus.
For the first time, Ash finally really
noticed the man. He'd never actually met him until now, and he was
shocked at just how big he was. Every bit as tall as his son, and if
anything, a bit taller.
But where Jax was built like an
athlete, tall and lean, his father was just plain huge. From his
massive arms, bulging with muscles, to his trunk like abdomen, the
man was simply massive.
What the f-- this guy is a surgeon?!
Before Ash could fully recover his
composure, another thought suddenly came to him.
"Wait, uh, mom, uh, if I'm in
Jax's room, then where's... he gonna sleep," Ash asked,
staring at the massive man towering over his wife.
"Marcus? Why with me, silly. What
did you think I meant, when I said we'd be sharing rooms? I'm not
going to make a guest sleep on the couch, dear."
Ash's mouth fell open in protest! This
was too much, he wasn't about to let his own wife share a room with
another man!!
"But, there's only one bed in
ou--I mean, your room?!" He shook his head, throwing out his
arms. "No, no... I want to talk to you about this. Privately."
Mandy narrowed her eyes. "We can
talk about it later, during our spa appointment."
Ash blinked; they'd just been to the
spa, two days before. "What appointment?"
"The one I just decided you need,
young lady," she said, gritting her teeth and
shooting daggers at him. "We can discuss the matter then. In
privacy."
Ash had heard that tone of voice from
his wife before; in fact, it was becoming alarmingly commonplace
lately. He wasn't about to drop the issue, but he knew when to pick
his battles. And starting a fight in front of their guests was not
the right time.
"Fine then." He used his most
sullen teen voice. "But if the couch is open, then I'm gonna
crash there tonight."
Mandy just shook her head, still
glaring at him. "Oh, no you will not be sleeping on the couch
either, young lady. I expect you to make Jax feel comfortable in his
new home, and he's been polite enough to allow you to share his room
until yours is finished. The least you can do is accept his
generosity."
Jax cleared his throat.
"Hey, uh, Miss M... So, speaking
of bedrooms, where exactly is my room?"
Mandy smiled at the boy. "Oh, I'm
sure Ash would love to give you a full tour of the house, won't you
sweetie? Jax's room is the one at the top of the stairs."
Ash frowned; that meant Jax was getting
the guest bedroom, which made sense, he guessed.
But, then what room was being
renovated for me?
"Wait, so... where is my room
gonna be, then?"
Rather than answer her husband, Mandy
turned to Marcus.
"My ex-husband had a room
downstairs, he always called it his little 'man-cave'. Since he's not
here anymore, I thought it would be the perfect place for Ashley's
new room. This way Jax gets his own place, Ashley gets her own little
area, and everyone's happy."
Marcus nodded. "Makes sense."
Ash felt his heart sink. Renovators
were going to be dismantling his den? A sickening feeling overtook
him, as he could only begin to imagine what fresh horrors Mandy had
planned for the space. She'd always wanted to clean the room out,
turn it into a storage space or something.
He started to ask her exactly what the
renovators were going to 'renovate', when another realization hit
him.
Wait, the guest bedroom? But....
"Wait, the guest bedr--I mean,
Jax's room, also only has one bed?!"
Mandy smiled at him. "Yes, and Jax
has very nicely agreed to let you share it with him."
Before he could get another word out,
the huge boy suddenly grabbed him, this time around the waist. "Come
on Ashley, talking to these old folks is boring. I'm dying for that
tour. And then you can show me where we'll be sleeping tonight."
The boy practically carried Ashley from
the room, as he stared back in horror at his wife, pleading silently
for help.
She just waved and winked back at him.
***
"FUCKKKKkkkkkkkkghhghh!!!!"
Ash shrieked, biting his lip and for once not caring about the flavor
of his gloss.
"Language!" Mandy snapped,
mockingly. She smiled at the salon worker, and shrugged. "I told
her shaving was way easier, but you know how girls are, they have to
do everything the other girls are doing."
The worker just nodded knowingly. "That
was the last one of that batch," she said, comfortingly, rubbing
a hand across Ash's bare legs, making him tense up. "Now we just
make a second pass, and get rid of any stubborn stragglers."
Blinking away tears, Ash glared up at
his wife, as he felt the worker apply another thick glob of hot wax
to his leg.
"AHHHHNnnnghghh!!!" Ash
screamed a second later, as the strip was suddenly torn away, burying
his face in the table's soft surface.
"Just a few more strips, and
you'll be done, dear," his wife soothed, rubbing the back of his
head. "And then we can have that talk you wanted to have, while
we work on our tans."
"What tan--AHHHHH!!!"
It is one thing to have a story like this where it really is just a misunderstanding. When there are just more and more obstacles that prevent the husband from changing back all the while the wife's help just makes it worse. But when the wife does something like this to just get out of having to get a divorce it makes no sense. If she would just go ahead and get a divorce she would probably end up with more than doing this roundabout scheme. Maybe some back story is missing since there seems to be no justification for her to do this.
ReplyDeleteI suppose from Ash's off-hand narration comment about what Marcus could have done to not lose his house that he has some sort of safeguards in place for Mandy not to go the usual route for this.
DeleteBut, yes, maybe there is some backstory that justifies all the extra flavor on top... ;)
I'd love to see this developed into a larger story, on par with the Plastic Surgeon's Revenge trilogy you did. It's very promising!
ReplyDeletei would love to see this story continue
ReplyDeleteps: i have the feeling that all the time Ash watched the Naked Bodybuilders on the net (involuntary) have conditioned him into starting to feel attracted to those types of guys and act like a flushed Teen Bimbo
Since this is Draft story , I don't understand many points .Even somehow I understand Ash wife convince him to play the part of a teenage daughter, how the hell he agree to implants. At that part story start to lose touch.
ReplyDeleteAnd the way the story suggested I think Ash is getting a new boyfriend. And even if he got implants what about his dick. How he is going to hide that. The story does not explain that or maybe because this is a Draft story.
This is all just my point of this story which I don't understand.
cant wait until ash has to go to school in his school uniform pleated mini skirt
ReplyDeleteI found myself, as I read, turning Ashley from a husband to a petite younger wife who was displeased to be losing her Mandy to a man -- and profoundly conflicted over being thrown together with her "stepbrother" Jax....
ReplyDeleteI'm not going to lie, I like this plot a lot better with a woman as the victim.
ReplyDeleteThat said, this really works for the sexy horror it presents. (I guess it is still delicious, but it could be more delicious?) Ash losing control of his life and realizing his predicament is turning more and more permanent, losing the little grip he had over his manhood and, in the very delicious ending bit, being tortured by his wife, reenforcing his submission to girlhood.
I suppose what other people said about the story having some hard to fill gaps is true, but it is a draft and it is fantasy... suspension of disbelief works for that.