Greetings! Today's caption is Femslut's prize cap, so naturally this is also one of my very rare forced feminization caps, with some hypnosis to boot.
I actually wrote most of this last week, but it took forever to find an
office girl picture I really liked. I think I found a pretty good match,
though. :-)
- B-Rex
such an amazing cap
ReplyDeleteThere is one thing I would like to see, to improve the cap.
ReplyDeleteThat's if the lettering Randi reads on the sign were depicted mirror-reversed, the way she would see them from inside her office.
But that's just me -- I'm always rewriting other people's captions....
Actually, I sort of intended that to be the case, but figured it was obvious enough without adding a line about Randall having to work out the new backwards wording.The cap was long enough, and I had to cut a bit from each paragraph to get it under 1,700 pixels wide as it was.
Delete(Unless you meant literally reversing the text in the caption? That might have looked cool, but would have been much harder to read, especially at 10pt font. Though I might have to try something like that in a future cap, if the opportunity ever comes up again.)
I'm actually more worried that I made the hypnosis occur too off-stage, instead of having Hannah use trigger-phrases through the phone. Originally I was going to have more dialogue with Hannah, explaining more of why she's doing this to Randall, and how, but again, the cap was already long enough.
Thanks for the feedback though, I'm always happy to see your thoughts on a new caption. :-)
- B-Rex
It's great to see that your still doing some of your TG captions I just love it when you do them your really good at it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoy them. I'm still quite interested in the TG fetish as a whole, and actually a fair fraction of my ebooks involve gender changes, but I started this blog mostly because I was tired of the dearth of non-tg captions and decided to make my own.
DeleteI've toyed with the idea of making a companion blog that focuses on TG caps exclusively, but I'm not sure I'm productive enough to manage another blog, on top of Degraded Damsels and Humbled Harlots.
But rest assured, I will continue to do the occasional TG cap, when the mood strikes me. :-)
- B-Rex
Wonderful caption. I had no expectation of such a prize when I entered your Thanksgiving contest. Thank you very much.
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