Happy Monday, everybody! Hopefully my Amazon woes are finally behind me. A quick recap:
Angela's Last Resort is back up,
Pledge Week Revenge is now
Panty Raider's Punishment, and
The Living Doll is back, with a new title and cover (though the story remains the same, aside from some very minor editing and spelling error fixes.) I really like the new cover, it really fits the mannequin-transformation theme of the story.
Anyway, I was hard at work on a totally different caption, when I found this picture of Jordan Carver and just had to cap it instead. A bit of breast expansion fun, with just a hint of the revenge yet to come. I hope you all enjoy it! :-)
I'm working on more caps, and trying to finish my new ebook before April, so assuming Amazon doesn't give me any more difficulties, I should finally be back on track.
- B-Rex
Love this tale! A self-absorbed hypocrite who basically engineers her own grand degradation in the name of grabbing herself some easy money. A great read already, whether or not you're planning to continue it.
ReplyDeleteIt feels like a BIT of a stretch that Julian's lottery winnings are enough to bring hundreds of people flocking, yet are gone after buying 1 car and 1 TV, but then again lottery jackpots are often paid in even annual amounts over a decade or two. It could be just this year's allotment that's gone, which means that April will suddenly be in for a vastly extended "sucking up" period if she wants a shot at the next 90-95% of it. That's a huge carrot...on the end of quite an extended stick.
Well, I had originally written out a series of items he blew the money on, including a new in-ground pool, a new roof for his double-wide trailer, paying off lots of old traffic tickets, etc. But it ended up a bit too long, and just didn't really look right, it really messed with the flow of the last paragraph.
ReplyDeleteAnd I didn't want him to spend the money on something that would still hold a lot of value, like a new mansion, or else April would still have a legitimate reason to stick around, since she'd only be a quick elopement and divorce away from getting her hands on his new mansion.
Still, I like your idea of him only wasting this year's payments; he'd have plenty of opportunities to drag April's self-induced punishment out for years to come.
- B-Rex
I agree with Meisa -- the best part is how April has done all of this to herself, trapped herself in a position which in her own mind is quite nightmarish, because of her overwhelming greed (or desperate need -- what HAS brought her so low?).
ReplyDeleteOh god, it took me so long to realize the pun! XD
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, revenge! Let reveeeenge come! >=D