UPDATED; See Below Please!!!!
Some years ago I started reading Katie Smith's wonderful Tracey stories, a series of tales of a busty young blonde English woman who keeps getting herself into trouble, usually involving forced public nudity or strip searching. Her old archive is here, mle123.co.uk/tracey/ and her new yahoo group is here, http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Traceystories/. I have already posted this story at her yahoo group.
Some years ago I started reading Katie Smith's wonderful Tracey stories, a series of tales of a busty young blonde English woman who keeps getting herself into trouble, usually involving forced public nudity or strip searching. Her old archive is here, mle123.co.uk/tracey/ and her new yahoo group is here, http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Traceystories/. I have already posted this story at her yahoo group.
I was inspired by Katie Smith's stories to write a few short stories about a young woman named Vera Purdee, back when I was in college, some years ago. Most of these tales were very short and poorly written, basically nothing more than story ideas really. Many of my captions have been based on these basic ideas. My caption from last July, The Other Woman, was based on the earlier version of this story. I have rewritten this tale to flesh it out into a proper story.
In this tale, Vera Purdee is delving into self-bondage, but something goes terribly wrong, as usually happens in such stories. I'm not sure if any of you are interested in such subject matter, but even if you don't, hopefully this story is interesting enough in its own right. If there is interest, I might try developing some of the other uncompleted Vera Purdee stories
Comments are always welcome, of course. :-)
- B-Rex
******UPDATE******
I think I'm happier with the ending of this story, than I have been with my previous efforts. The beginning seems a little weak to me, but the ending is a definite improvement for me. It also seems to leave people wanting more. Which is a good thing, judging by the comments. Your imagination keeps working out how the next part of the story would go. So if you have any ideas of your own for how the story might continue, please share them, I love reading them. (And so do a lot of other people, I'm sure) :-)
I've really imagined my Vera Purdee stories as being basically one-off, self-contained tales, each a fresh start, much like Katie Smith's Tracey stories. So I doubt I'll make a sequel. But I absolutely love all of the ideas that Maria, Ian, Dr Psycho have expressed in their comments.
So I've been thinking about it and I'd really love if someone else would write a sequel to this, or even just a short epilogue, taking place a few days after my own ending. I could post it as a guest post, like I have done in the past with Kimmy Foster and Dr Psycho's caption series. (See my contact info on the right side for my gmail account address.) I'd love to make this blog a little more interactive than it is right now, maybe build a real community. I think that is the best way to keep my muse active. Too many captioneers/writers retire because things get stagnant and feedback dies off. I'd like to prevent that.
Thank you everyone, for the comments and feedback and your wonderful devilish ideas, :-)
- B-Rex
******UPDATE******
I think I'm happier with the ending of this story, than I have been with my previous efforts. The beginning seems a little weak to me, but the ending is a definite improvement for me. It also seems to leave people wanting more. Which is a good thing, judging by the comments. Your imagination keeps working out how the next part of the story would go. So if you have any ideas of your own for how the story might continue, please share them, I love reading them. (And so do a lot of other people, I'm sure) :-)
I've really imagined my Vera Purdee stories as being basically one-off, self-contained tales, each a fresh start, much like Katie Smith's Tracey stories. So I doubt I'll make a sequel. But I absolutely love all of the ideas that Maria, Ian, Dr Psycho have expressed in their comments.
So I've been thinking about it and I'd really love if someone else would write a sequel to this, or even just a short epilogue, taking place a few days after my own ending. I could post it as a guest post, like I have done in the past with Kimmy Foster and Dr Psycho's caption series. (See my contact info on the right side for my gmail account address.) I'd love to make this blog a little more interactive than it is right now, maybe build a real community. I think that is the best way to keep my muse active. Too many captioneers/writers retire because things get stagnant and feedback dies off. I'd like to prevent that.
Thank you everyone, for the comments and feedback and your wonderful devilish ideas, :-)
- B-Rex
*******
The
Adventures of Vera Purdee #01 – The Box of Doom
(2004; Revised 2013)
by
B-Rex
*******
Vera
Purdee moaned, as she fingered her pussy. She had been a self-bondage
enthusiast since her high school years, and she was finally finished
setting up her project. If it worked as planned, it would be her
biggest, most thrilling adventure yet!
She had
tied herself up even when she was still a kid, and as she hit
puberty, she began to realize that the idea of being bound or
otherwise helpless really turned her on. She was even lucky enough to
find a boyfriend her sophomore year who was into bondage, but it just
wasn't the same. For some reason, she got the biggest kick out of
self-bondage. Becoming helpless, entirely through her own actions. Or
mistakes. She couldn't really explain it, but it was just hit her
buttons so much more than mundane bondage did.
Throughout
college she had experimented, soon learning about hiding keys in ice
blocks or using timed locks. She acquired a large collection of gear
for her little adventures, almost always carefully set up before time
in the safety of her apartment. Except once.
One
time she had dared to try her game in a public place. It had been a
total disaster and scared her so much that she hadn't bothered trying
again, even alone in her apartment, for several months afterward.
And
yet, that experience had also been the single most arousing event of
her life! She fantasized about it, almost every night, and relived
that day over and over. Slowly, she began to change the event, adding
new humiliating details, making it ever more frightening and
arousing.
***
Nearly
a year earlier, one early July night, she had parked her car beside
the community pool in the center of town.
She had
been totally nude, save for a few leather straps. She had hid her car
keys under a rock next to the gazebo in the neighboring park, next to
the baseball diamond. Hiding in the backseat, she had gotten
everything ready for her night out. A frozen milk jug full of ice hid
the keys to the various locks that would bind her leather straps
together, and she had tested it repeatedly to be certain that it
would melt enough to remove the keys within a few hours, even if the
temperature did drop.
After a
few minutes, she was securely bound in her maze of straps, complete
with a tight ball gag for her mouth. A cop had driven by, and flashed
the car with his headlights, but he left without a moments
hesitation. Vera had then pulled out the massive vibrator she had
bought for the occasion. It had several settings and had a handy
attachment allowing her to plug it into the car's cigarette lighter.
For
hours that horrible vibrator had brought her to one orgasm after
another, utterly draining her, until finally the ice melted and she
was able to unlock herself. Up to that point, everything had gone
perfectly to plan.
With
the sun just starting to rise over the horizon, she had darted out of
the car, still totally nude and recovered her keys. A couple of early
joggers had ran through the park, forcing her to hide in the bushes.
She had spent nearly half an hour running from one clump of shrub to
another, until she finally reached her car.
She
jumped into the driver's seat, jammed the keys into the ignition, and
off she drove. Or at least, that was the plan. Instead, the car
failed to turn over. Even the radio didn't come on. Only then had she
realized that the vibrator had done more than drain her, it had also
totally drained her car battery!
Vera
had spent the rest of the day hiding in the backseat of her
sweltering car, with only a thin towel to cover herself from prying
eyes. The windows were powered, and so couldn't be lowered, and she
didn't dare pop one of the doors open. Outside, hundreds of people
had gathered, first to swim in the pool and later to play several
rounds of baseball. It was the 4th of July weekend, after all.
When
the sun went down, Vera had started to leave the car, thinking she
could make a run back to her apartment. But then more people had
shown up, unexpectedly. Suddenly, the sky had filled with explosions!
Only then did Vera remember the fireworks display had been scheduled
for that night.
Ultimately,
she had remained trapped in her car until well after midnight, before
she had finally been able to make another daring run across the park
to her apartment next to campus. It was terrifying, and exhilarating.
And her landlady, Miss Dimple had seen her! The woman had hated her
ever since.
Vera
eventually got over the humiliating experience, and returned to her
nightly experiments with self-bondage. But try as she might, she just
couldn't recapture the strange mixture of raw fear and complete
arousal that she had experienced that long day in July.
But
now, at long last, she just might have found a way to recreate that
experience, without having to put herself in such a dangerous
position. Or at least, it would be more controllable than her
adventure in the car.
***
Vera
had spent months working out her plans, trying out a few ideas on
their own, and finding that many of them did in fact heighten her
experience. Now, she was finally ready to bring everything together,
and really live out her ultimate fantasy.
She had
carefully built a box, a large wooden box. It was about 5 feet long,
and 3 feet along the other sides. The inside was a perfect cube
though, exactly 3 feet to a side. 27 cubic feet of interior volume.
It was amazing!
Metal
would have been even better, but Vera didn't know much about working
with sheet metal, and besides, her landlady would never have let her
use such loud equipment in the apartment complex. Hell, if she knew
that Vera had been building the box, she'd have flipped out!
But
wood was a perfectly acceptable building material, Vera had decided.
The box was strong, sturdy, and the wood was thick. She had hidden a
radio inside, on max volume, and the box was completely silent when
she shut the door.
Vera
sighed longingly at her wonderful box, and looked out the window at
the horizon. She had chosen an east facing window, so the sunrise
would fall on the box the next morning. That was important, very
important.
She
still had a few hours before sunset, she didn't dare risk setting the
box up just yet, not until all sunlight had vanished. She'd just have
to wait. Luckily, she had other things to set up.
A
program on her computer was preset to upload a series of emails. The
first email would go out just after sunrise, to a local moving
company. Her credit card info was already in their system, so they'd
just receive her email, send some people over and pack her little
wooden cube onto their truck. Then they'd ship it across the country
by rail, to the coast, where it would be placed on another train and
sent across the country again. Eventually it would be reloaded onto a
train bound back for Vera's state, where it would eventually be
returned to her apartment. She had figured that the entire trip would
take at least 5 days, and she had planned for a full week, just in
case.
The
shippers weren't cheap; if that email was actually sent in the
morning, she'd be out most of her savings by the time the box was
returned. It was a hell of a lot to risk, but she was quite certain
it wouldn't be a problem. But just knowing what would happen if she
failed in her task sent a shiver down her spine and straight to her
loins.
She
made sure that she was totally paid up in her rent and electric
bills. The last thing she need was to lose her apartment if something
went horribly wrong. She saw that the sun was finally dropping away.
This was it, time to get the box ready.
***
The
glue Vera used to seal the door shut was specially designed. She had
tested it repeatedly, just to be sure. In total darkness, the glue
would remain liquid and it would be easy to push the front of the box
outwards, letting her escape. She finished putting a thick bead of
the glue around the door frame and threw the empty glue container
away. She stripped naked in the bathroom and took a quick shower. If
something did go wrong, she'd be in that container for quite some
time.
Vera
returned to her living room, and checked the window again. It was
night. A loud buzzing and popping startled her. She looked back out,
and saw that her landlady had turned on the large bug zapper she hung
outside the complex when the mosquito were getting too troublesome.
She sighed, she hated that stupid bug zapper. It made the whole
complex look so cheap and trashy.
She
slid into the small box. 27 cubic feet wasn't much, and she was
sharing it with a lot of stuff. Vera took a deep breath and pulled on
the leather strap she had attached to the box door. The door lifted
up off the floor on its hinges and popped into place. She heard the
the tell-tale click, as the door lock was engaged. This was it, now
she was truly trapped. The thought made her pussy moisten, filling
the small cube with the smell of her sex.
There
was no time to waste though. Vera had designed the box as a test of
sorts. She had to unlock the door, before daylight entered the room
and fell on the box. If that happened, the door would be permanently
glued shut. She'd be totally trapped, with no hope for rescue until
the box was returned. She had already made up a second email,
explaining everything, which would be sent in 4 days to her landlady
and several other people. It wasn't a flawless rescue plan, but it
should be enough. Besides, she wasn't going to get stuck in this box
anyway.
Vera
felt around until she found the glow stick. She bent it and shook it
until the box was filled with an eerie green glow. She had already
tested to make sure the glow sticks didn't put out any ultraviolet
light that would activate the glue.
In the
glow, she could easily make out a series of large metal dildos,
attached to the side of the box. She sighed. This was going to be
humiliating as all hell, but it had to be done. She dropped the glow
stick into her pile of other sticks, and slowly slid her mouth down
the huge cock.
It was
difficult to deep-throat the damn thing, but she had to. After
several minutes of trying, she managed to fight off her gag reflex,
and felt her lips brush the base of the wretched phallus. She started
sucking like crazy.
Vera
had designed the locking mechanism to ensure that she would have to
spend hours sucking on that damn cock. Hidden inside the thick wooden
wall, a long line of thick plastic hose ran down from the base of the
dildo, to coil around above the false ceiling, and down again into a
tank of water she had built into the hidden back portion of the box.
It contained more than 10 gallons of water. The coils were very long,
looping around over her several times. This was for a reason; she
would have to suck out a tremendous amount of air before the
reservoir of water could even start to run up the hose and to her
mouth.
The
water tank sat on a metal plate, with a strong spring under it. When
the plate was unpressed, the metal pin now locking the door shut
would be pulled out. It was incredibly simple. She just had to remove
a certain amount of water, and the lighter tank would be lifted by
the spring, along with the plate.
She had
decided 1 gallon of water was a good amount to shoot for. Now she was
having second thoughts. It was hard as hell to suck long enough to
even taste the water in her mouth. And if she lost suction, even for
a split second, the water would run back down the coils. Thankfully,
siphon action meant that at least a little water would be shot out of
the cock, usually right into the back of her throat!
But it
took forever to get to that point. She had decided at the last minute
that the task was too simple and had drilled a few small holes along
the length of the dildo. If she hadn't, she'd have been able to just
pop her tongue or finger in the end of the cock and give herself a
breather. As it was, she had to completely deep-throat the cock just
to begin sucking, and it was taking at least a few minutes of hard
sucking to get even a little water out.
She
couldn't just spit the water out either, she hadn't realized that
when she drilled the stupid holes. She either could swallow the water
as she sucked, or break suction to spit it out. She couldn't do that
without have to start all over again. It was taking much longer than
she had planned.
The
water-lock wasn't the only issue though; she had set up two other
dildos, for her hands. Each was made up of two parts, one stationary,
and one that slid over the other. She had to pump her hands up and
down, constantly. As long as she did, a small blower in the bottom of
the box would stay on. The pumping mechanisms had been salvaged from
two small shake-up flashlights. Pumping them vigorously produced just
enough electricity to run the blower, which brought fresh air into
the box. Otherwise, the air holes she had built in would be barely
adequate to keep her from passing out. She really only needed to pump
the cocks a few minutes each hour, but due to her exertion trying to
suck up water, she was going through oxygen faster than normal.
This
went on for a few hours, until she just had to take a break. She had
drank a lot of water, and it was starting to hit her bladder.
She had
hoped to avoid this, but she had no choice now; carefully maneuvering
herself, Vera pulled a large diaper out of a bag and wrapped it
around herself. The bag contained only 3 dozen, hopefully enough for
a week of ablutions. She peed into the diaper, which was even more
humiliating than she had expected. She thought about keep the diaper
on, just in case she needed it again. She didn't really want to waste
them.
Finally
she made up her mind and shoved the diaper into a small hole in back
of her box. She had built a small area to function as a trash box,
beside the plastic water tank. The smell of pee was overpowering,
even stronger than the smell of her gushing pussy juices. She found a
small bag of sanitary wipes and cleaned herself as best she could.
Her
belly grumbled. She was getting hungry. She ran her hands around and
found the glow stick. Her food was also stored in the back of the
box, in the hidden recess with the trash box and water tank. She
looked at the water-cock; she really shouldn't be wasting time on
food, but she was hungry and she had at least 7 hours until sunrise,
she calculated. She hadn't brought a watch along.
Getting
the food required her to start sucking on another dildo. The coil
from the back of this cock was shorter, but the food paste that she
was sucking up from it was much thicker than mere water. As the thick
gruel finally began to plop out into her mouth in humiliating little
spurts, she began to chide herself again. Why, oh why, had she
decided to puree a head of cabbage and a few dozen cans of beans? The
cup of fiber powder and soy protein hadn't been a good idea either.
It took
several minutes before she felt full. Her lips were sore and her
cheeks burned from all of the sucking. She dreaded returning to the
water-cock, but she knew she had to.
***
The sky
was just starting to get light outside; a thin line of water had ran
from a hidden drain in false floor of the box and dribbled slowly out
over Vera's apartment floor. Birds started chirping.
Inside
the box, Vera was still sucking like mad. She knew she didn't have
much time left, but she was certain the sun wasn't up just yet. She
removed the one-way peephole from her apartment door and set it into
the box lid. It wouldn't bring in much light, not nearly enough to
see by, but when the sun was up it would be glowing visibly. It was
still dark. She sucked and sucked, spitting out water on her cramped
floorspace.
She had
regretted throwing away her diaper a few hours later; she was wearing
another one now, wet with pee. Her belly rumbled, and not with
hunger. She desperately needed to get to a proper toilet and quickly.
The fiber powder, beans, and cabbage puree had hit her hard.
Suddenly,
with a single blast of water into her mouth, she felt the box
shudder. The water tank had finally risen up enough. A loud metallic
ping came to her ears as the lock disengaged the door. With glee she
shoved her weight against the door...and bounced off!
She
shook her head; what had she done wrong? Had she just imagined the
sound of the lock unlocking? She pushed against the door again. Still
nothing. It didn't even budge. With dread, she checked the tiny
peephole again. It was still dark.
The
door easily withstood the next few frantic attacks. She kicked it,
punched it, even tried to pry the other walls away. Had the water on
the floor made the wood swell?
Suddenly,
she had a horrible thought; that damned bug zapper! Had it put out
enough ultraviolet to activate the glue? She couldn't be sure, but
she suspected. She tried the door one last time, even as the peephole
began to glow.
***
8 days
later, the box was hand delivered to Vera's apartment complex. The
movers left, thanking the landlady for letting them in.
Gladys
Dimple waved the men away and walked inside. She slowly pranced
around the box, smugly. As soon as she had received her tenant's
email, she had hurried up to her apartment, hoping the movers hadn't
taken the box away, but it was gone. Vera's laptop was still there
though, still running a program. It was just about to send out
another wave of emails, this time to some of Vera's friends,
explaining her predicament and asking them for help getting her out
of the box when it arrived.
Instead,
Gladys had rewritten the emails; now, as far as her friends would
know, Vera was taking a few weeks off for vacation. They'd believe
them too, after all the emails had come from Vera's own account.
The
landlady grinned down at the box. She had reread Vera's email to her
several times. She hadn't really believed it until now.
She
wondered if Vera had ran out of diapers yet. She peered down into the
box, looking through the small one-way peephole. Vera had installed
it in reverse; Vera wouldn't be able to see outside the box, but
anyone outside could look in.
Gladys
saw the faint green glow of a glow stick and the ever bobbing head of
Vera Purdee. She still had water then, and probably a bit of food.
Hmm...
She
stood back and looked at the box plans she had taken from Vera's room
a few days earlier. If she drilled a hole right here, she could
refill the water tank and the food tank. Vera's diaper supply would
run out eventually, but there was no real reason to let her out of
her box today. Or tomorrow.
Or next
week for that matter. Best to let the little slut stew in her juices.
Gladys
smiled evilly as she left the apartment to go find a drill.
*******
loved this story look forward to more or veras mis adventures
ReplyDeleteFANTASTIC story B-Rex! I do love a self-bondage story where things goes horribly wrong (or right!) for the intrepid heroine - particularly when it involves discovery by someone all to willing to take advantage.
ReplyDeleteMight I suggest Gladys install a small hatch to allow new diapers to be supplied to Vera? :)
Love it!!!! Perhaps Gladys could drill another hole and make it a glory hole for fun and profit!
ReplyDeleteMmmmm, I enjoyed the story, and the three comments above mine added considerably to my enjoyment.
ReplyDeleteEspecially Maria's. I can just imagine Gladys rationalizing her enjoyment of Vera's predicament as "punishment" for her immoral behavior. And of course once she has rationalized one addition to Vera's suffering (the cancelled e-mails), she might easily move on to another (keeping Vera trapped inside), and then another (Ian's addition) and then yet another (maria's).
I do like the idea of Gladys removing one of the dildos (the food supply, I suppose) and replacing it with a plug that can be opened by anyone who pays a fee to use Gladys' gloryhole. A little Botox throat spray will paralyze her vocal cords long enough to keep her from calling for help during a shift of gloryhole service, and the threat of not getting her food supply pipe back (or of having, say, habanero sauce added to it) will make her eager to perform for the customers . . . .
That's what I love about the comments on B-Rex's caps - everyone just takes the depravity and humiliation possibilities and RUNS with them. :)
ReplyDeleteOkay, I have now e-mailed you a picture file with incorporated text, and also the text in a plain format. Let me know if there is any problem with the e-mail, and I hope readers enjoy the fillup I have added to your story, Rex.
ReplyDeleteAnyone who doesn't like it may feel free to think of it as a nasty fantasy in Gladys' mind.
Good start would love to see it continue. How is the last of the last resort coming?
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