Guest Post: Alternative Present 4 by Meisa

Meisa emailed me several pictures and a short text to accompany them. The pics are low-res, so I'm just going to post the text file and a few of the pics. Meisa said "Though I've never done captioning myself, I decided that I liked the Present series so much that I took a stab at writing the next Cucumber part that Part 3 was hinting at."

So this caption is an alternative to Present 4, and honestly I think I prefer this story to my own version. Please enjoy, and don't forget to comment. Meisa is thinking about making a sequel, and I'm sure any feedback would be useful as inspiration.

Caption after the break, as always.

- B-Rex

The Midnight Surgeon

So here's a somewhat darker caption I've been working on, sort of a throwback to my earlier captions back when this blog started last Summer. I've been morphing this particular image for ages, trying out different ideas, until a decent caption-idea came to me.

I often make multiple morphs of an image before settling on something I like and the rest gets lost in my huge picture folders. So this time I've decided to include a few of the other morphs I made, to give a sort of behind-the-scenes look at the process that goes into a completed caption and show you what gets left on the cutting room floor. Some of these aren't totally polished, but still look pretty good, in my humble opinion. :-)

The caption and the morphs are after the break, as always. Please let me know what you think of this approach. I personally have always enjoyed seeing the process elaborated on by other captioneers in the past, so hopefully some of you will also enjoy this. And as for the caption itself, I like the idea of a mad surgeon altering random women against their will, so I'll probably make a few more caps like this in the future. It's a good setting to explore some my darker surgical alteration ideas.

- B-Rex

Present 4 - Hide the Cucumber

When we last saw her, Sheila was forced to prance in front of her Mistress and two of her socialite 'friends', after having her hair dyed a bimbo blonde. Then the drunk women decided to make Sheila play a cruel game with the cucumbers she bought in Present 2.

I wasn't really planning on showing this part, but then I found these pictures and they just fit too well to ignore. Two captions, after the break. Please enjoy! :-)

- B-Rex

An Update, a few links, and a new caption!

Hello all! My hand is still a bit sore, but is much better now. Thanks to all who have expressed their well-wishes.

Now, I have a few things I need to mention, after the break. Plus there is a new caption!

Hiatus - for a while

Sorry about the lack of updates, but I've smashed my hand in a door and won't be able to type easily for a few days. Silly problem, but there's nothing for it. This short message is trouble enough. Sorry. :-(

- B-Rex

Epilogue to Vera Purdee #01 - Guest story by Dr. Psycho

 Dr. Psycho just emailed me this pseudo-epilogue/sequel captioned image to my Vera Purdee #01 story from the other day. She has plenty of food and water and gets to provide a useful service to society.

Thank you Dr. Psycho, I really enjoyed this epilogue. I love this glimpse of Miss Purdee's dark future in the box. I always enjoy your comments for their interesting ideas, and this story really illustrates your wonderfully twisted imagination. :-) Hopefully I can come up with some more opportunities for collaborative efforts in the near future.

The caption and plain text are after the break, please enjoy and be sure to comment, I'm sure Dr. Psycho appreciates it!

- B-Rex

Jackie O

Two new captions, that I was working on last Halloween and never got around to finishing until now. Oh well, better late than never.

Also, I've updated the previous Vera Purdee post, so be sure to read my message there, especially if the story inspired any interesting ideas of your own.

Caps after the break, as per usual.

- B-Rex

Vera Purdee #01 - New Story; Updated!!

UPDATED; See Below Please!!!!

Some years ago I started reading Katie Smith's wonderful Tracey stories, a series of tales of a busty young blonde English woman who keeps getting herself into trouble, usually involving forced public nudity or strip searching. Her old archive is here, mle123.co.uk/tracey/ and her new yahoo group is here, http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Traceystories/. I have already posted this story at her yahoo group.

I was inspired by Katie Smith's stories to write a few short stories about a young woman named Vera Purdee, back when I was in college, some years ago. Most of these tales were very short and poorly written, basically nothing more than story ideas really. Many of my captions have been based on these basic ideas. My caption from last July, The Other Woman, was based on the earlier version of this story. I have rewritten this tale to flesh it out into a proper story.

In this tale, Vera Purdee is delving into self-bondage, but something goes terribly wrong, as usually happens in such stories. I'm not sure if any of you are interested in such subject matter, but even if you don't, hopefully this story is interesting enough in its own right. If there is interest, I might try developing some of the other uncompleted Vera Purdee stories

Comments are always welcome, of course. :-)

- B-Rex

******UPDATE******

I think I'm happier with the ending of this story, than I have been with my previous efforts. The beginning seems a little weak to me, but the ending is a definite improvement for me. It also seems to leave people wanting more. Which is a good thing, judging by the comments. Your imagination keeps working out how the next part of the story would go. So if you have any ideas of your own for how the story might continue, please share them, I love reading them. (And so do a lot of other people, I'm sure) :-)

I've really imagined my Vera Purdee stories as being basically one-off, self-contained tales, each a fresh start, much like Katie Smith's Tracey stories. So I doubt I'll make a sequel. But I absolutely love all of the ideas that Maria, Ian, Dr Psycho have expressed in their comments. 

So I've been thinking about it and I'd really love if someone else would write a sequel to this, or even just a short epilogue, taking place a few days after my own ending. I could post it as a guest post, like I have done in the past with Kimmy Foster and Dr Psycho's caption series. (See my contact info on the right side for my gmail account address.) I'd love to make this blog a little more interactive than it is right now, maybe build a real community. I think that is the best way to keep my muse active. Too many captioneers/writers retire because things get stagnant and feedback dies off. I'd like to prevent that.

Thank you everyone, for the comments and feedback and your wonderful devilish ideas, :-)
- B-Rex

Present 3

 Here's the next 2 captions in the Present series, as promised. Just a quick little addition, with some simple morph work. I'm thinking I might look for a few cucumbers for the next installment....

Also, I've written a story inspired by Katie Smith's Tracey stories. I'll post it here in a day or two. It is a longer version of my earlier caption from last July, The Other Woman.

Enjoy, caps after the break,

- B-Rex
 

Pet 3 - Dog Show and Tricks

Former divorce lawyer, Rebecca, a.k.a. Muffi, spends a day at the dog show!

I wanted to show off what her new hands looked like, but even though I have tons of puppygirl pictures, almost none of them really show off the girl's hands. I'll keep looking though, and if I get a good morph done of just the hands, I'll add it to a future posting. I have a little more planned for this impromptu series, and I'll post those caps in a few days.

Two captioned images here, after the break. I've got two captions finished for the Present series as well, which I'll post sometime tomorrow. Please enjoy!

- B-Rex

Present 2 - continued

Forced surgery and public humiliation, a few of my favorite things. :-)

This is a single-caption sequel to my earlier post from December, Present. It's a bet less tame, and fairly long for a caption, but then some people like that sort of thing. I've got a few interesting pics to work with, so I might make a few more captions following Sheila's progression into total bimbo-dom.

I hope you all enjoy it, I liked the image a lot and have been saving it for some time looking for a story to go with it.

- B-Rex

Flagpole

This is one of those times when I saw the picture and the story just popped into my head. It's just a quick, hopefully funny story, and very tame. And obviously inspired by one of the better Christmas movies.

- B-Rex

Pet 2 - Muffi's Day Out

Here's a quick sequel to my earlier post, Pet. I wasn't planning on making a sequel, but when I found this picture, it was just too good to ignore.

On the earlier caption I was planning of morphing the image to alter the puppygirl's hands, but it never looked right. So this picture worked out perfectly for me, story wise. Hopefully I'll find a good picture for a future 3rd caption, that will let me show off her new hands.

One caption, after the break. Please enjoy, and comment frequently. It might help me maintain this posting surge I seem to be on at the moment. 4 posts in 5 days! :-)

- B-Rex

Days of Summer

It's cold outside right now and I'm starting to miss summer. So here's a little summer themed caption series about revenge, a gold digger, and an vindictive wife.

4 caps, after the break, as always. These are pretty light fare, by my standards, but I liked the picture set and the story just popped into my head.

- B-Rex

Warmer

I managed to get two more caps loaded! I've got a thing for permanent bondage, and while this isn't my best morph ever or anything, it came out a lot better than I had expected.

I keep having problems with my internet connection, so instead of posting a whole batch of caps at once, I think I'll just stick to posting whatever I manage to get loaded. I might be able to get another cap up tomorrow sometime, or Sunday.

Enjoy, this is a short 2-parter. After the break, as always.

- B-Rex

Pet

I was hoping to have a whole batch of single-image captions to post, but my internet connection has been giving me fits for the past several days or so. It was a lot of trouble just to get this image loaded, I had to reload it 3 4 times. :-(

Hopefully it will work this time. I'll wait a few days and try posting the others. I've got three more single captions made, but if I wait, I should be able to make a few more to post all at once. Hope you all like permanent concrete bondage. :-)

Oh, and this is a very wide caption, but it works for me on preview so I think it'll still be legible for all of you. For good measure, I've added the text underneath.

- B-Rex

P.S. I should also mention that Todd Cheese has updated his wonderful Age Regression epic story, Keilani's Long Vacation, at his site here: http://toddcheese.tripod.com/ Just one more part before it's finally completed!